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You ask me if I'm okay
And I don't reply;
I just walk away.
Over and over,
Day after day,
It's that same little question
To which I have no say.
Finally after yet another try
I look at you
Meeting your worried eyes.
I put on a smile
And force out a laugh.
"Of course silly!
I'm more than alright."
I lie.
A sigh escapes your lips
And your hand touches my hip.
Your head leans on mine
And your arms wrap my close.
You whisper in my ear,
"I'm sorry I'm the one who hurts you the most."
I'm soon gonna have a story up that better explains this. Link will be on when it's done.
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Luminescence553 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I only have one friend who understands that sometimes I'd rather not be bothered. She is a great friend who can see past the lies I tell people, and we really understand each other. It makes me upset to know that some of my classmates talk about her as if she was a witch and expect me to agree with them. People wonder why I'm silent during our conversations sometimes and they want to know if I'm okay. Most of the time I tell them I'm tired, she's the only one who understands that I'm not physically tired, but mentally tired. I love this piece of work, it really speaks to me.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
We all need a friend like that. I can't tell you much really but that I agree and can relate on mental tiredness.
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A think a lot of people can relate to this ^^ Lovely poem ♥
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.
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pimpaladettesdude Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
DANG RIGHT though to the picture
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BlueBird236 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
The poem is wonderful, and I relate to that quote with every fiber of my being.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks~ glad u do.
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Crazy--Panda Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Student General Artist
thats totaly awesome
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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RavensXGirl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I reallly like this :)
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you so much!
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RavensXGirl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Anytime! :)
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know the feeling you have its the want it be loved it's a sad ugly truth but it doesn't change anything. Your still sad and lonley
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
um... okay?
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha sorry I guess I don't make any sense
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it's okay. my mind's been dead since i posted this poem b/c of all the comments and favs and hates. oh well. it will return... soon hopefully..
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha just eat brockly I know it sounds strange but it makes new brain cells
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i already tried that...
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Ichigoisawsome Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha were you watching spongebob that destroys brain cells
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i hate Spongebob! >.<
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xBoringAssPersonx Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's really true isn't it?
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhm.
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Daggy1995 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Reminds me of my own situation... only, there is no one to hug me close and whisper anything.
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CASEwazLYIN Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry if i'm eaves dropping... but me too.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
same. i just thought of it.
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Razercow Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Brilliant work
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. ^^
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Fathom-Matrix Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
:hug:
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Mangosmoothwins Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very true.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you.
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khazukiart Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
:'( I know how you feel...
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a lot of ppl do but not a lot will admit it.
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ballwon1 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Someone else knows how I feel:) Happy-er-ish Thank you for this.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
np
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Guy01 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012
Word. Great work XxwhybelievexX.
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you. :)
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Guy01 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
You're welcome!
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Shrew-WiFi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Fffffff. I felt like crying after reading this. ;A; I can't stop. I wish a, uh, certain someone would do this to me.

Awesome job. ;u;
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks; and don't we all? i've never had this happen to me...
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Shrew-WiFi Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Student General Artist
If anyone has had it happen to them, then...well, then that's just amazing. o_o
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
mhm.
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Martinoice Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What?
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
....?
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Martinoice Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...
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XxwhybelievexX Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ur confusing me dude.
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Martinoice Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, right? :O
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KiimeTsukyomi Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Student General Artist
That's fucking beautiful ;_;
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